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Two coffees

Level 6

Two Coffees

Note: The characters in this story bear no intentional resemblance to any person living or dead.

Paula nudged her workmate in the ribs and whispered 'Here he comes!' They shared a snigger and a knowing look as they turned to greet the customer.
'Two coffees, please,' said the middle-aged man in a long beige trenchcoat.
'Would you like espresso, cappuccino, latte, or mocha..... sir?
'Erm.... two of your finest cappuccinos, please,' said the man, smiling at Paula.
Paula smiled back at the customer. He was reasonably handsome for a guy in his forties, but his strange behaviour was a turn-off for her. She always wondered why no really great guys came into the cafe to sweep her off her feet.
After paying for his drinks and tucking his receipt into his jacket pocket, the customer moved along to the counter with the red light, where he waited patiently for his order. After Paula had prepared the cappuccinos, he put them on a small plastic tray with two teaspoons, two sachets of sugar, and two paper napkins, and carefully made his way across the busy room and settled down at a table by the large window. Every time someone approached the cafe he looked up expectantly, but time and again, expectation was replaced with disappointment.
'How long did you say he's been coming here?' Paula's new workmate asked.
'About two years, give or take a month. Every Friday at 11am, come rain or shine. You could set your watch by him. I like him but he's too weird for me!'
'Yeah, he gives me the creeps, to tell you the truth. And, who's he waiting for?'
'Who knows? Maybe his ex-girlfriend, maybe his boyfriend. He always buys two coffees.'

Sitting in the corner of the cafe was a young woman reading a thick novel. Her mobile phone was sitting on the table next to her mug. She appeared to be reading her book but was constantly checking her phone, although, to her dismay, no messages seemed to come. Still, she kept picking it up and checking it. When she wasn't checking it, her eyes kept darting glances at it, as if through sheer willpower she could make it ring or buzz or chime. Then suddenly, it started to vibrate and a pink light began flashing, demanding attention. She dropped her book down and grabbed the phone from the table. After a second it was obvious that whoever had sent her a mail, was not the person she was expecting. She tossed the phone back onto the table, knocking into the coffee cup and spilling cafe au lait over her book. She had to rush and fetch some paper towels to clean up the mess. Two elderly ladies at the next table stopped chattering, and watched her with expressions that showed exactly how they felt about young women and mobile phones. Paula rushed over to assist as best she could.
When things had calmed down, the girl picked up her mobile phone again, and checked it, before returning to her book. She knew he wasn't going to mail or call today.

Sally felt excited as she drove down Green Drive, along Sheridan Avenue and onto the High Street. There was a lot of traffic for a Friday and she kept having to stop and slip into neutral. At each stop she checked her face in the rearview mirror. She noticed the small lines around her mouth were getting deeper. They no longer faded after a good sleep. The lines made her bright red lipstick bleed into the pale foundation that caked her face. Sally hoped the thick foundation would hide the heavy bags under her eyes, and that people would think she were younger. In fact, there was one person in particular who she wanted to look upon her favourably; one person who would take her in his arms and kiss her.
As she passed the cafe she noticed her stupid ex-husband was in there again. He didn't seem to notice her, but of course he didn't know she had a new car. He probably wouldn't be pleased as she had paid for it with her divorce settlement. The thought of him made her shudder. There was no way she could be happy with a man like him; she had no choice but to leave. No other choice.
At the end of the High Street, she turned her car left into Victoria Road and continued down to the health centre. After parking, she walked in and went to reception. 'I'm here to see Doctor Stanton.'
'It's Mrs Sally Newham, isn't it?' the receptionist said with no emotion or warmth.
'It's MISS Newham, but yes, that's right. I have a eleven-twenty appointment.'
'Please take a seat MISS Newham. The doctor will call you when he is ready.'
Sally took a seat in the pastel-coloured waiting area next to a young man with a bandaged wrist, and pretended to read a magazine, as her heart beat fast in her chest.

Doctor Stanton's phone was in his jacket pocket, and his jacket was in the closet. His last patient, Mr Aziz, had taken far longer than he should have, whinging and whining about his gout, and his bad knees, and his chronic backache. The doctor wanted to mail Trudy, but there simply wasn't time. They had met the previous evening and driven out into the countryside. Their lovemaking was so passionate, not like with his wife. Passion between them had died years before. He thought he really should mail Trudy just to say hello and tell her he was thinking about her. And then he should mail his wife too, just to stop her from becoming suspicious. She was starting to ask him questions about his whereabouts and schedule. It was all starting to be a bit much. Come to think of it, maybe he shouldn't mail Trudy at all today. She was getting too attached to him, too clingy. He didn't need another woman depending on him, sucking his energy. And on top of that, his next patient was Sally Newham. She had a thing for him, he was sure of it. She came to the surgery at least twice a month with some minor problem like a sore throat, a 'strange' pain in her abdomen, dizzy spells.
Doctor Stanton washed his hands and settled in his seat. He leaned into the microphone of the intercom system and said, 'Miss Newham, room 5, please.'
A few seconds later, there was a knock at the door and Miss Newham entered. 'Good morning doctor. Thank you for seeing me.'
'Take a seat, Miss Newham, and tell me what the problem is today.'

The young girl looked up from her book. Standing in front of her was a middle-aged man holding two cups of coffee. 'You look like you need a coffee, and I have a spare cup' he said.
Trudy looked at him and he smiled. 'Erm... well... okay.. thanks!' She said, and returned his smile.
'Are you waiting for an important call?' he asked, as he took a seat.
'I was, but I don't think it's going to come.' Trudy put her phone in her bag. 'And how about you? You seemed to be sitting there alone with two coffees. Waiting for someone special?'
'Well... I suppose that must have looked strange! I used to come here with my ex-wife when we first met. But.. well.. we got divorced a while ago. Maybe it's not so easy to get used to her being gone from my life.'
'That's okay, I understand, and I'm Trudy, by the way.'
'Nice to meet you Trudy. I'm Michael.'
Over at the counter, Paula and her workmate were watching and smiling. Paula nudged her friend and whispered, 'Two more coffees, please.'

Copyright: Sean Anderson Jan 26th 2010. All rights reserved.

Adjectives
sheer: Here used to give emphasis to the word 'willpower'.
chronic: A chronic disease or problem cannot be cured.
clingy: Too dependent on another person.

Adverbs
expectantly: Waiting in a hopeful way.

Verbs
nudge: To push something gently. Often with your elbow.
sweep sb. off their feet: To make someone fall in love with you very strongly.
give sb. the creeps: To make someone feel uncomfortable and a little scared.
dart: To move quickly.
toss: To throw something in a casual way.
slip into neutral: To shift the gear lever of your car into the neutral position.
bleed into: When one colured substance moves slowly from one area to another area.
cake: To cover something with another substance which is thick and hard.
shudder: Here meaning 'to shake for a short time because something is unpleasant.
whinge: To continue complaining in an annoying way.
whine: To complain in a sad annoying voice.
have a thing for sb.: To be attracted to someone in a romantic way.

Nouns
a snigger: A quiet and often unkind laugh, especially at something that is not funny.
a knowing look: A way of looking that shows that you understand the situation.
dismay: A feeling of worry, disappointment and unhappiness.
a glance: A quick look at something.
a divorce settlement: The financial agreement after a divorce. In this case: money.
gout: A disease that makes your toes, and often fingers and knees swollen and painful.
whereabouts: The location where something or someone is.
a dizzy spell: A short period of time when your head feels like it's spinning, and you feel weak, and think you are going to fall over.

Expressions
give or take: Here meaning 'about' or 'approximately'.
come rain or shine: In either good or bad weather, meaning 'always'.
a bit much: Too difficult to accept and endure.
come to think of it: Used when you suddenly have a new thought or idea.


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